Feedback on Production Pitch

After giving my presentation on my production I got some really helpful feedback, which should help with the development of my idea.

Firstly was the idea of graphic matching or match cuts where two different compositions or spaces, graphically match. This should give me a really good video in terms of mise-en-scene as it shows I match shots closely. The idea came from two pictures I used my presentation, that created like a sort of path even though they were different locations. I really like this idea about matching shots and was already wondering about doing it in my production. Here's a link to a video showing some match cuts, that I think work really effectively. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rI82hsBrq8w. I think this video shows how match cuts gives videos an interesting twist, which I like. 

Secondly was idea's of song choice that would fit well with this idea. One suggestion that I really like was Lana Del Rey's Money Power Glory -https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ctFNlAn3z3k. I think the slow beat of the song works well with the idea of graphic matching. I think the song I'm going to choose is James Blake's Limit to You Love -

I think this song works well with the third suggestion of  matching the action with the beat of the music. As this has a very regular beat I think it would work really well with not only composition of shot matching but all people's actions matching the rhythm of the song, hopefully creating an effective music video.